Post by ichi. on May 17, 2008 15:25:08 GMT -5
Okee guys.. I have to remake my loveleh site >Puppy Paradise< but it got a new name now >Lost Ecstasy<
I made a plot for it and I want to know what you guys think(((the reason why it had to be remade was cuz I got blocked from certain Proboards servers and there is still only one, PPs, that I'm blocked from so I can't go copy anything))) So yea.. Please vote and please reply to this thread with your comments! ^ ^
WARNING I know the last few sentences in the fourth paragraph is a bit disturbing but I have to make some way for them to reproduce or something xD
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There was a time when humans roamed the world, as well as dog, their young and every other animal. But a time came when a disease broke out throughout the world, it took your organs in your body first and then ate you from the inside out basically. It attacked the humans first. Then it spread from the humans to their pet dogs, and from their pets to all the other animals in chains. The humans became highly endangered and the wild animals killed the diseased until their was only one left. She was healthy perfectly and not ordinary. The other animals started to die down until only canines were left, because they were smart and strong and lived to fight the disease. The only human left befriended all the canines and eventually only the adults, of the specific dog part of the canines were left in the world. She guided them and used her magic to heal them when they were sick, or if they were too sick to be healed then she killed them quickly to shorten their pain.
After forty years since the disease broke out the dogs were becoming less and less. Every time a dog died, the girl would be severely hurt, but not physically. No, but deep in her mind. Yes, mentally. Her head would hurt and even when she tried to shove the darkness away, her head still ached for days. Since many dogs died every day she couldn't concentrate on using her magic to heal them from her constant head pains. So one day, she couldn't take the dogs dieing anymore, not because she wanted her head to stop being in pain, but because she wanted her family to survive. She was so connected to them, and loved them all so much that she thought of them as family and she couldn't let her family die just because she couldn't heal them quick enough. So one day she walked into a place where the disease first broke out and stood there. She ignored the pain in her head and shoved it aside rather violently.
She found the disease and choked it with her magic. But when the event happened, she was so angry and deeply saddened. A bright light came from her, a power even unknown to it's owner. She didn't even know that she had something so pure inside herself, surely even she had darkness! Nobody was all pure, but that was about to be turned around. The light spread around the whole world. In another two years, the girl had enough strength to see if she could find her family. She traveled to the meadows where they had lived. But something horrible had happened. She found them all on their sides or standing like statues. They were all staring at the same thing, something she could not see. They were all dead, all her family had died. She finally broke, thinking that she was all darkness and just horrible. But what she didn't know, was the light and goodness of life that she had brought upon her family. Yes, the adults died, but the rest of her family still lived...
All the puppies were trapped somewhere, somewhere that was on earth, but at the same time it was the farthest from it. You must think, wait wait wait! That's not even possible.. right? Well your wrong, because the girl, unknowingly, trapped all the young life of her family in time. They were all stuck in a time warp, but another strange thing happened to them. At first, they all went their, sleeping, and in their dreams they saw exactly what happened but when they awoke they had no memory of parents or anything else for that matter. And also they had a strange tingling feeling throughout their bodies. It was magic, originally all the same, but eventually, after a bit of play they became separate. The puppies, never aging, lived with each other. There were only five, and they became a bit lonely. So, in their loneliness of sorts, they figured out how to reproduce. There was actually one growth in the puppies, their reproductive organs, nothing else, not their age or body size or anything, just the reproductive organs. Unfortunately there was only one female in the group so....
When she had her first litter she was extremely protective so that another male wouldn't kill them to mate with her again. In her first litter they were all females but one little runt. After a while the time warp was swarming with puppies. But something happened..
For some reason, the time warp flashed off for a couple seconds and the puppies got a glimpse of the real world. But when it did so, the first puppies to the time warp suddenly got their age sagging on them and died, every puppy that had lived so long died, leaving only few puppies scattering the warp. The world was no more, it was all ugly and devastated. It was destroyed. One puppy saw a glowing orb in the distance and five puppies of the survivors were selected. The time warp became one again. The glowing orb came to the fives puppies and spoke to them. A time will come when you will find unnatural things occurring. Five will take upon something new as well and face this. The puppies didn't understand what she was talking about but she wasn't done. All the puppies in the time warp were white. But the orb sent out mini orbs to the pups.
The first got a tan orb, it had a bit of white. He turned tan with a white splotch on his chest, he had few black parts and earned two strange markings, one on his head, the other on his flank. The second got a black orb with a few tan places, she became black with tan legs, chest and tan on her face. She also got two strange markings, one on her left front leg, at the top and the other on her flank. The third got a tan/brown one with a little white. She became the color of the orb with white legs, tail-tip and other small parts of her body. She received three strange markings, two on her forehead, but different from the first's, right beside each other, almost touching. The other on her flank. The fourth received a white orb with a little black, he became white with black spots(example: dalmatian-looking) and received a marking on both his flanks, and both his front legs at the top. The last received a black orb with a little blue. She became black with blue paws, ear-tips, tail-tip, underbelly fur tips and chest, and under her muzzle. She received five markings. One was a strange marking along her back, the next was on her muzzle in a strange but gorgeous design. The third was on her right flank, the fourth on her tail, curling around her tail in a strange way. The last marking read something in another language, unknown to the puppies, it was place right smack on her forehead.
The orb left, the puppies ruled and the five puppies that weren't all white were highly respected, but still, every dog lived equally. Some say that these five puppies are an omen of death, others say that they will save them from a terrible omen. But nobody fights upon the subject, and no matter the puppy, the five puppies are treated like regulars.
